This was quite a positive crit and one of the more helpful ones that I have had. I came out of the crit with some more ideas and ways to link them in to my work and some good feedback.
These are the issues that I need to deal with:
- Experiment with using the skeleton design idea and see if it comes off as too harsh. I should probably decide whether I will take the 'big beautiful creatures' route or the more drastic 'they are dying' route.
- Work on creating a set logo and some kind of branding.
- Experiment with using colour, it could work well and there is no harm in trying.
- See if I can work the 'Big' attribute. People usually love big animals like elephants and giraffes and whales and stuff.
- Do more illustrations of the rays - Find some more illustration context.
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