Wrap it up - The results

Here are my results for the 'Wrap it up' brief. As you can see it didn't go very well.

At least I got one positive statement written which is nice. I'm not sure if this is a complete design issue or if it was to do with the printing stock or something, but it probably would have helped if the stock has been better quality which is my fault for not leaving enough time to digital print.
Other than that there isn't really any feedback.